Sunday, March 1, 2015

Entry #4
Waiting for the Sun to Rise

This entry is to be read in the Chatham Cadence. It occurred to me, some of you might not have heard the Chatham Cadence yet, so I broke the entry down to the way it's read and am working on attaching a recording.




Monday 2/23/15

The sun
rose
as I drove to work,
Apocalyptic
played
through the car's speakers
and I thought,
yes,
this
is what I'll write about
in this week's blog.
Tomorrow,
I will watch the sun rise
and write about
all I experience.




Tuesday 2/24/15
 It's snowing
and the sky
is gray.
The snowflakes
are the large ones
that make the best
packing snow.
Today,
would be a great day
to build snowman.
But I don't want
to build a snowman,
and even if I did
I must go
to work.
Tomorrow,
I'll catch the sunrise
and write about it.



Wednesday 2/25/15

More snow,
with a more
ominous sky.
The snowflakes
are minute
and barely visible
against the
ash
colored
backdrop.
The sun
isn't visible
at all.
What
shall I write about
now?









Saturday 2/28/15


            Waiting to for the right moment to do anything is bad. Waiting to write is worse. I finally had another sunny day on Friday. The sun rose as I drove to work, which is normal. I drove, angry at the sun for choosing, that moment, when the steering wheel prevented me from writing. I considered recording my ideas but decided to enjoy the warmth instead.
            My morning commute has become a meditation. I listen to music and clear my mind. My days are full of crap and these thirty minutes of peace are necessary for my sanity.

            When I'm at work people bring me problems and I fix them, it's my job. The issues begin the moment I open my email, which is minutes after I walk in the door, moments after I've left my car and paused to admire the sun peaking above Walmart.
            Also a part of my morning ritual, is making a glass of tea, at the front of the office, when the sun is making its way to mid sky. I enjoy the light before going back to my cube.

            I called my dad when I got to work and asked him to take a picture of the sunrise. I thought he would take Romy with him and stand in the driveway. Instead he stood at our front windows and took a picture that summed up this post. To the right youll find his picture: thats my driveway, the clear spot is where my car sits. At that moment, my car, like me, was at work while the sun rose over Bayberry Drive.

Question did you continue in Chatham Cadence after I switched to writing normal paragraphs? Im sneaky. =)


7 comments:

  1. What an awesome entry! I know nothing of the Chatham Cadence. I'm fascinated!

    I agree that it's these little chunks of quiet reflection which carry me through an otherwise less-than-perfect day, especially of late. Dawn is my favorite time, and I have no one to share it with, and I've grown to love that. Your series of dawn photos go well with the writing this week. They feel both peaceful and lonely and crisp.

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  2. Love this post Lisa! The pictures are perfect. I love the series of short poems. So sweet. "And I thought, yes, this is what I'll write about in this week's blog..."

    And yes, I kept reading in Chatham Cadence once you switched. Made me laugh.

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  3. I don't know the Chatham Cadence, but I definitely caught A Cadence in the poems! (I also noticed it carried into the first part of the Saturday post...until my brain caught up to itself and started reading 'normal' You are sneaky :))

    The thread of catching a sunrise to write about was lovely. I kept getting excited that you'd caught it and I was going to hear about this amazing sunrise, and then I kept getting let down by that, but caught up in what else you were seeing and experiencing. Wonderful and creative post!

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  4. Lisa,

    I really like how the idea of waiting for something to happen played off of your daily routine. It always intrigues me when I think about chance--especially when it comes to writing. What I end up writing about almost always has something to do with what happened to me that day. Very nice pictures, as well. :)

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  5. I appreciate that you're playing with form here and are also considering the *idea* of the sunrise.

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  6. I'm not familiar with the Chatham Cadence, but I enjoyed this post a lot. I was hoping the whole time you would finally catch a worthy sunrise.

    Even though I don't know the Chatham Cadence, there was definitely a rhythm to your post and it was very engaging, moving quickly from idea to idea. Nice post! (And I'm looking forward to your recording!)

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  7. I'm not familiar with the Chatham Cadence, but I enjoyed this post a lot. I was hoping the whole time you would finally catch a worthy sunrise.

    Even though I don't know the Chatham Cadence, there was definitely a rhythm to your post and it was very engaging, moving quickly from idea to idea. Nice post! (And I'm looking forward to your recording!)

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